Do's		Dont's
	Do write sentences of different lengths Do write some dialogue in between describing what's happening. Do write a question or several questions in a row. Do start sentences in different ways		Don't use the words and, then, or but to link your ideas too often. This is boring! Use different words like: as, next, later, when, whilst, or use commas and full stops instead, like this: Don't keep starting your sentences with the same word. This is boring! Find different ways to start your sentences, like this:

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